In class we showed our second Rough Cut of our Horror film to our media group. We have already shown them one preview of our movie and they have given us feedback for our first one but this time we showed them a second rough cut which included tittles and improvements from our last rough cut. here is a link to our second rough cut http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A39uZBq1YX4&safe=active.
After showing the class our send rough cut we again received feedback on what we had done. Here is our feedback that we were given:
"The tittle chosen was a really good choice in colour, the red and white matches the theme to the rest of the film opening. With the titles looking professional it made it look like a real horror film opening."
"The added sound to the production company was effective to make it look like a real production company that had been producing your film."
"The theme of the colours match the production company."
"The use of titles and font was effective and fitted what was happening on screen. Also the positioning of the titles worked well with what was going on, it didn't obstruct anything happening on the screen."
"The fact that the original idea was to make it look like found footage, the title of the film 'November 23rd' was great because that was the date of the event and the crime. It made it better in the sense that it convinces the audience more that it is a true story."
"The tension building music made me feel like i was in the movie and that something bad was going to happen. Although as effective as it is to have it, at times i felt that is was too loud and it took over more than it should have. So much that i couldn't hear what was going on with the characters."
"There needs to be a transition between the production company and the beginning of the film because it makes it look very unprofessional."
I have read all these feedback comments and my group and I will do our best to take them all into consideration and put them into our horror film in order to make it better.
Your production company logo and title sequence looks good and your music choice is great. Look at the transition from title to film as it is quite fast. You also need to look at the volume levels as the music is very loud.
ReplyDeletePlease make sure your link to your rough cut works.