Feedback

Here is the link to my Prezi Presentation about my 'Horror Film Pitch' http://prezi.com/es2m6ydyec8w/horror-film-pitch/

After my group presented our presentation, we were given feedback on how to make our horror film better. The feedback our fellow peers gave us was:

"It was really good i like the way you presented everything very clearly the presentation explains all the ideas well and it shows that you have thought through your ideas."

"The point of view shot is a good idea because it makes the movie seem more realistic for the audience but just make sure that the camera isn't completely disoriented just a little shakey because if the camera is too shakey then the audience wont be able to see what is going on properly."

"The location is a good idea but because you are filming in a park at night that presents a challenge for you with the lighting. It is good to have darkness but you still need to be able to see so just make sure that the lighting comes through good and your film will be fine."

"The park you have chosen has a time limit on it before it closes so make sure you go in film and leave before it closes."

"You might want to try a different park like Larkhall park."

"As long as the girl looks dead it will be really good, plus the more dead she looks the more realistic your movie will be."

I have read all these feedback comments and i will see to it that i put them into my movie in order to make it better.